Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Themistocles

Themistocles, gather your fleet
Get ev’ry one up on their feet
Say, we’re going to war
A trireme’s oars are swinging to the beat
Of the pipe and drum
The sound’s pitch overcomes the water
I know of a place
To hide your wives and daughters

All the things we’ve left behind go up in flames
Yet, for now, our freedom, love and life remains
Since you took the reins

Poseidon, won’t you take our side?
Shake the land, and calm the seas
It’s on you we rely
To help vanquish all our enemies
Committing deicide
I confide that you are needed
To bring them to their knees
To leave ‘em humbled and defeated

And when the brilliance of a man rebuffs the odds
He’s, for a time, elevated to a god
But then he’s just a sod

Themistocles, don’t look back
Glory fades and fealty wanes
We’re not under attack
Though blood creates a lasting stain
Cast out and bereaved
Made to leave and without honor
Will they remember your name?
And will your soul be soldered?

5 comments:

  1. What a fascinating choice of subject. He dies in exile in Magnesia, yes?

    Well written.

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  2. I believe so although I had to look it up just now in Wikipedia. It says he went there to treat his acid reflux. That doesn't sound right though--and no citation given.

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  3. Thanks, man. Started writing it a while ago after watching a PBS documentary on Ancient Greece. Seemed like a poetic story. I just decided to finish it today. It's actually meant to be song lyrics, which I may start recording in the near future. The verses are meant to be a conversation between Poseidon (God) and Themistocles himself with the shorter stanzas as the refrain.

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  4. psst. just realized this is kevin. hi, kev!

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  5. Hey, Chrissie! As you can tell, I've been letching for good reading material. I was happy to see your post and also glad to re-connect with you. Hope you're well!

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